Today we brought in the second iterations of our posters to screen print and had a second critique.
I am pleased with the direction my poster is taking; it still has a calm & natural feel, but now my composition has a context.
Moving forward, I'd like to refine the shape of the bike and fix my perspective work by paying more attention to the angle of the bicycle and the size of the trees. I also want to refine the typography a bit; my classmates mentioned that the "D" and the "S" are a bit difficult to read.
I'll also try adding some more trees to the background, and use line weight to create more of a hierarchy within my composition.
I am pleased with the direction my poster is taking; it still has a calm & natural feel, but now my composition has a context.
Moving forward, I'd like to refine the shape of the bike and fix my perspective work by paying more attention to the angle of the bicycle and the size of the trees. I also want to refine the typography a bit; my classmates mentioned that the "D" and the "S" are a bit difficult to read.
I'll also try adding some more trees to the background, and use line weight to create more of a hierarchy within my composition.
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